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Wednesday 22 June 2016

God's Gift-LindaKiki

One of my favourite poems from this term is a original poem by one f my peers Lindakiki. She is a very talented girl that I respect. But when it comes to writing her words flow like a river. Also Linda and I write in a similar way so it's quite hard to come to an idea for who's writing is who. I love the rhymes she came up with and the descriptive paragraphs.

God's Gift:

Entering the light of God,
I see a man so bright he is almost 7ft tall,
Creating us to be in his palm of his hands,
So precious he sent us down to his own motherland,
Going to sleep was my only plan
But, seeing God I was a big fan


A loving god he is a man
Who serves us with light not dark
He watches us from above
He’s the blue sky I will always love
By LindaKiki

2 comments:

Lindakiki @ Glenbrae School said...

This is so nice of you Luisa,
I really enjoy your poems as well and hope to see more coming.

Luisa said...

Thank you very much Linda kiki.

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