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Wednesday, 20 July 2016

Day 6~Story Ending~Entertaining the Crowd


Imagine that you are sitting in the crowd at the opening ceremonies for the Rio Olympics this August. The ceremony has just started and all of the Olympic athletes are parading around the stadium in their uniforms when all of a sudden…

I have to finish of the short story with at least 10-20 lines.

.......A jet flew by. Underneath the jet, a door opened and slime oozed out. The jet flew in circles covering all the athletes with green and slimy slime. As everyone cried in horror, they got as many of the slime of their uniforms. Everyone seemed to be frustrated for their uniforms were wrecked. What a waste of time preparing their uniforms. Calls were made out of Rio and frustration spread like butter on toast. Then another jet flew by but they were all ready to face whatever was next. In a matter of seconds water came down from the jet and as the water touched the slime, the slime dissolved. Everyone ran to the center of the stadium and got very wet. Their uniforms soon looked brand new and better than ever. Still, their uniforms were a little damp. Turned out that the whole jet thing was to just clean all their uniforms. Everyone thought"What an odd way to clean out uniforms?", "Why did they choose to clean our uniforms while we were still wearing it?". No questions were answered, but the show continued.

2 comments:

Danni Stone said...

Hi Luisa, I love your idea for this story - it is quite funny! Can you imagine what it would be like if this happened at Glenbrae? I loved the description you included, it allowed me to imagine the story in my head and to follow along with what was happening. My favourite line was your simile - "frustration spread like butter on toast", it is a wonderful way to express this.

Anonymous said...

Hi Luisa
I find your story very funny, And I enjoyed your simile "frustration spread like butter on toast" I also liked the way you used your word and what you said everybody was thinking that was quite funny as well.
well done

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