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Monday, 11 April 2016

Space

W.A.L.T , learn the right way to structure our description writing.

A never ending space, out of this world. Where there’s nothing but darkness and sparkles of light. If you get lost there’s no telling where you end up, maybe you’ll get sucked into a disintegrating black hole.

Just imagine being in a floating machine, soaring through the universe. Bright stars passing by shimmering brightly in the night sky, flashing and flickering in various colours. But wait that’s not all, all the planets glistening with elegant colours, standing out astonishingly. There are more than one universe, one more beautiful than the other.

If you think that’s exciting, wait until you check out our hovering ship. Leather surroundings and various buttons, just eager to try all of them. With one push on one button, all is weightless with no force pulling you down. Hovering free in the air, floating with grace, gliding with such peacefulness. Zooming rapidly though the universe, passing by astonishing views filled with colour and all types of shapes. Outside our universe our more worlds, where there are replicas of our planet somewhere out in the dark consuming space of wilderness.

There’s only one livable planet that comes to mind. A place very familiar, which is very divine. A place full of all colours and living sources. Yes, you guessed it, the one and only Earth. Not only are we the only livable planet, we are filled with large amount of land with water surrounding the land. With beautiful colours, mostly blue and green. But the best thing that comes with this planet, is the civilized animals who rule among the earth.  



3 comments:

Danni Stone said...

You have created a magical description of space Luisa! It makes me want to go to an observatory! I hope you will continue to use such descriptive language in the genres that we cover next term!

Luisa said...

Thank you very much Miss. Stone

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