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Monday 7 March 2016

Mary-Anne

This is my description about my second older sister who I adore very much.

Firefly like eyes dazzle from a distance and right there she’s recognized. No one can resist her deadly glare which lures you and takes you under her control. Her long light ash brown hair looks like a flowing golden river. The blonde streaks in between her luscious hair gives her hair a light feeling. Her smooth pale skin feels like a serene polished pearl that glistens when touched. The hair that straightens up on her skin feels like soft grass. Even if you are a metre away or closer you can still pick up her velvety scent that makes your nose bloom up with excitement.

Though her appearance is appealing her personality is not so far away. She moves slightly different from the others, like a prancing horse but slightly gentle. To get her adrenaline fired up all you have to do is touch her belongings, she steams up ready to explode full of anger. Though sometimes her movements are graceful like angels disguised as swans.

She might seem peaceful and graceful but she’s all tenacious, stubborn and rough when it comes to her hobbies. It’s like a butterfly and a buffalo except she’s the buffalo. Her hobbies are playing rugby(with boys) and just going on social media. Her and her phone are like honey and glue stuck to each other. Her horn like fists power through the air like a sword cutting through thin air when she is play fighting.




2 comments:

Stef Parker said...

So many interesting adjectives you have used Luisa.
Have you shown your sister this description of her, I'm sure that she would be honoured. Keep up the creative writing.
Mrs Parker

Luisa said...

Hey Mrs,Parker it's so exciting to hear back from you. Thank you for the feedback, if it weren't for your great advice last year I wouldn't be where I am right now.

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