WALT - To write a narrative about a time at the mall with friends.
SC - A beginning middle and end… with a moral to the story.
For the past week or so, I have been working on a narrative about zombies and the morale of the story I have written is to don't underestimate a evil mastermind.
“Run girls run, I’ll take care of them” cried Felicity. “Don’t worry, we got your back sis”, yelled the twins. Felicity, Lisa and Cassidy are zombies hunters and sisters who had been traveling to Atlanta to find their cousins. As they were travelling they came upon a shopping mall that looked pretty normal to them. They entered the mall to look for food and new clothes but weren't very surprised to see zombies lurking around the shops. The girls snuck into one of the food shops hoping no zombies saw them until they heard a noise in the aisle beside them. They peeked through tiny holes through the shopping items. They were very surprised to see another girl in the store, “Psst psst, over here, how did you come in here unseen and duck the zombies are going to see you” whispered Lisa. The mysterious girl grinned at them in a creepy way that gave the twins goosebumps. Then the girl turned into a zombie and did a zombie called OOOH errr cried the zombie girl. Felicity, Lisa and Cassidy realised they were trapped because zombies just appeared in every entrance of the mall and of the shop they were in.
“Run girls run, I’ll take care of them” cried Felicity. “Don’t worry, we got your back sis”, yelled the twins. The zombies attacked the girls, Felicity took her weapon out but was too late the zombies had already got the twins and now Felicity. They took all the girls to a cave underneath the mall, as they were dragged there were zombies turning into humans and back into a zombie. At the same time they were fascinated but disturbed. All the zombies they passed had a sinister smirk on their faces and froze as they came past, almost like statues. Felicity, Lisa and Cassidy tried to get hold of eachother’s hand but were pulled apart by the zombies. As they reached the end of the cave, a secret entrance was revealed and then closed as they walked in. It was so dark and damp, they felt their hair on their skin straighten because they were creeped out. Finally they met the mastermind behind their capture. All the girls gulped at the same time, they were angry and surprised, it turned out the masterminds were their own parents. In disbelief, Lisa opened her mouth but no words came spilling out, same did Cassidy and Felicity.
“Welcome my darlings, like what I have done with place” said Mrs. Rode, there was a pause of silence for a few seconds before she started to talk again. “Well aren’t you happy to see us, oh and don’t worry we are their zombie leader so they won’t attack us, whispered Mrs. Rode. “So you're a nasty zombie?, mum do you even know what we do for living? Do you?” yelled Felicity. “Of course I do, so to stop you girls from destroying our kind is to turn all of you into zombies” said Mrs. Rode in a sickening voice. Mrs. Rode got a needle with green liquid in it, Felicity’s eyes widened as she saw the needles. “she’s going to infect us, quick snap out of it Felicity, get over your fears fast” yelled Cassidy. Mrs.Rode knew that they will eventually break free so she pretended to fall and landed on Cassidy injecting the needle in her as fast as she could and dropped the needle. “Ow, hey guys look she dropped the needle, I bet I could wriggle over there and cut the ropes off my hands and legs than yours.” As cassidy shuffled over to the needle, Mrs.Rode walked to another room. Cassidy struggled getting the ropes off but when she did there were rope burns around her wrist and ankle. Same with Felicity and Lisa. They quickly ran into a room with photos and pictures of them when they were little. They admired the photos, while still rubbing their wrists. “Come on, don’t get distracted, hey look theres another door” said Lisa. They opened the door, coming to a dead end, they felt the wall and accidentally pressed a hidden button on the wall. The wall flipped over slowly, giving the girls time to run through.
“Hey we’re back at the mall, OK so escape plan is to sneak through all the zombies using our disguise masks”, said Lisa, “Got it, OK move out.” But first they put their disguise masks on and snuck around blending into everything they touched. They were two blocks away from the exit until a siren rung ordering the zombies to search for the girls. Cassidy felt a shock in her body, her eyes turned black and her hair turned grey. Cassidy pressed a small button on her disguise mask which turned off Lisa and Felicity’s masks off. Cassidy screamed “Attack them, now!”, and so did the zombies. Felicity ran to a light switch which turned off all the lights in the mall, she pressed the switch up and lightning traveled through all the lights in the mall turning them off. Felicity went into night vision mode realising that Lisa had already gone outside. She also realised that she was surrounded by the zombies, not knowing that she was right in front of them. Before Felicity snuck out, she stuck a grenade on each of the zombies and ran out. “Felicity i’m over here” puffed Lisa, “Come on, this place is about to blow” said Felicity. They entered a forest just a few blocks away from the mall, they ran up a hill just in time to see the mall explode. “What came over Cassidy, she acted very different and looks very different” sobbed Lisa. “Maybe it was the virus that mum had, she must have injected it when she fell on Cassidy” said Felicity hugging Lisa, “but that’s another journey for another day, and right now we have stick together for us and for Cassidy.”
The End
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